Sunday 3 March 2013

55 WORDS REALISATION

This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 37; the thirty-seventh edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton. The theme for the month is "Truth is stranger than fiction"

I & She are childhood friends.
We grew together with our same Passion
BOLLYWOOD MOVIES.
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We became Young & fell in Love
Our dream was like bollywood  stories.
like mene pyar kiya , ishqjaade.
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Breakup
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 As usual  dreams are broken as we are from 
different CAST & Level
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Then We  realised 
Truth is stranger than fiction

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Jitendra Jain
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20 comments:

  1. Karan Shah3 March 2013 at 10:51

    nice attempt...should have put in a li'l more thought in it
    ATB for BAT
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  2. AJNABI3 March 2013 at 11:00

    Thanks for visiting and drop by.... Ya but I want to put in only 55 words... Thanks... All d best too keep visiting...:)

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  3. Neeta3 March 2013 at 23:43

    Good attempt on 55 Fiction. Put in more effort on spacing, grammar and capitalization errors.

    Keep writing more. All the best for BAT :)

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    1. AJNABI3 March 2013 at 23:56

      Thanks.. To visiting and droping comment..!!! And... Ur suggestion is good... Will tack care next time.... !! Keep visiting...

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  4. Mixi4 March 2013 at 04:03

    As a 55-fiction piece, this is actually a pretty complete story. If only there had been an unexpected twist or more characters to this story, it would have been even more enjoyable.

    Nonetheless, a good attempt :)

    Cheers!
    Mixi (My BAT entry)

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    1. AJNABI4 March 2013 at 10:29

      Thanks MIXi. For came here and commenting.... Ya there should be more.. Point... Nd twist.... But i just want to try it in only 55 words... Thanks... Keep writing and visiting

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  5. odyzz5 March 2013 at 03:28

    The effort for writing a 55 fiction in commendable ..but I completely agree with Mixi that a little twist at the end would have made this fiction even more interesting..All the best for BAT



    I am here
    http://odizzey.wordpress.com/2013/03/03/truth-is-stranger-than-fiction-bat-wow-blogadda/

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    1. AJNABI5 March 2013 at 04:35

      Thanks fr coming here... And commenting.... Am glad u found it commentable.... Ya... There should be more.twist....!! But I want to put it In 55 words only....!d keep visiting

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  6. Maliny6 March 2013 at 00:32

    55 fiction conveys a lot in a few words and in that regard you have done a good job . It can real stunning when we weave a suspense towards the end . Try that out next time . Would love to read it too :)

    Nice attempt :)

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    1. AJNABI6 March 2013 at 10:24

      Thanks maliny..for ur kind word and suggestion... !!! I will tak care next tym for better 1... Thanks for commenting..plz keep visiting...

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  7. aativas6 March 2013 at 03:17

    Nice attempt. Good Luck for BAT.

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    1. AJNABI6 March 2013 at 10:27

      Hmm thanks.. Fr come here and commenting.. Keep visiting...!!!

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  8. Cifar6 March 2013 at 03:30

    very filmy,but nice

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  9. AJNABI6 March 2013 at 10:30

    Hmm i am glad to see here...!!! Thanks for commenting and u feel it is nyc...!!! Keep writing..... And keep visiting...

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  10. Vajra8 March 2013 at 21:06

    Short and sweet as 55 fiction is what it says..Good attempt...ATB for BAT 37

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  11. Saru Singhal17 March 2013 at 15:07

    That is a big problem in our country. When God has made us all equals, why create unnecessary segregation.

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    1. AJNABI17 March 2013 at 21:40

      Thanks saru ji for visiting and commenting...... This unnecesarry segreation always hurt.. Keep visiting

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  12. Vaishali Jain9 April 2013 at 13:13

    Truth, indeed, is stranger than fiction. I never could understand these caste etc ke funde. I still don't. To me, they are all pointless.

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  13. AJNABI9 April 2013 at 13:56

    Hey vaisali welcome to my blog thaks for commenting.keep visting...

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